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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,( y0 ~, a6 @" h* z, n" t9 i
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
3 k$ ]2 ?# j% O* V, X8 k零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . + S* T/ e- `6 |. ?
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.: ]; m4 |+ w0 d, Q9 U' I
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
! H# F! _, W0 H2 v* ~/ D! A眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
4 \/ u" q7 ~* u# r. G9 ^" A夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
; q7 F9 \. {7 m# `. [# {猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
% R& o! T5 [% U2 ^/ [' l就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
9 g- W7 Y% ]' x; N: L: \+ m" J我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及) ]5 ~- `5 K2 h4 L& x
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
( `6 C. D% z' B. K, v, l世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
" D L1 u# \, h1 o0 {6 D4 s昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
9 J. P: ^8 ?1 W5 d! W/ l r. }想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.; I+ f" \0 T, F& a! w0 l% R# l
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 7 P& x, s$ ]& M, F6 E
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?: w! _6 k% {. e9 b1 Y3 p% @
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.: v: ~4 m9 `5 I8 ^) E& h+ ~
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
; X1 O9 [5 \2 Q& ^7 Z# F- ~+ e最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have./ Q: s& ` \% f4 m+ j) a2 A, o' I
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?: r. Z2 h. w. F5 d
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….1 t8 Y8 s$ O9 N4 q& h- ~6 D
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously) p7 ^4 n: @, m/ H/ F
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.# w2 t( }, |7 | A1 E( y
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 8 g' T) w* n- u, B. d
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
. a0 `7 N% w6 k, r4 `多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!/ _: J5 M; Z4 |8 i5 q7 y% \, W
永难平息的泪
$ _# k0 r) S3 Q) t; X) v" v每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
0 l% B# s( |7 o+ J( N~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
& U, a. [- o+ F当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.$ n% m4 s! m! ?' f
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,% ]1 L, N0 M5 H A
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 1 A" E- N# I+ ~7 `' Z8 Z
一抹微笑;
8 ?' A4 ?9 H2 |- K一个手势;
$ M. A; F* Z# F: Y一片话语,( D, Q' L4 m$ }) D2 ~6 k: l% M
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
9 l: ?- x8 h1 n9 Z+ V6 y- {明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
( I1 ^% }* q! T2 Q P1 n心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy." r: z" E% F& W% Q) Z+ G" a
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling1 v2 e/ W" ^4 [6 ?. P s2 R& F
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
# Q- f2 G0 |# U起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
5 ]" s; R" V$ F1 A我并不以为然。; Z- _; C2 J" X1 C5 ]8 z A
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed D5 j1 ^9 n: \! s
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .- Z0 q7 s4 R0 b5 H9 W3 R! @
被一种情绪所左右,
% k. R# P9 Q% a) i总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
9 h2 K! J4 `8 b即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
& Y8 q" n h5 @. x* X( d% a. `也不问我是否喜欢你,9 U! B& B3 m0 {8 W$ W
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
' p3 g; f3 {, I$ F- {; C只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
: U4 t9 T5 g6 N3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you& @6 L3 m, U" e, q. D
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
8 j9 o% U# g6 ~! N然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
' {+ g8 Y7 ^& E% h' _& d7 H* H' o% P你的身影已化成一种氛围,- w5 _" M: P7 E( c* I- v7 q5 w
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
/ L1 P* v/ `; Z- P# T I你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 4 c7 u3 Z; R# J5 y
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
/ X" u3 _5 H; R& C Z* o0 f哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
; M+ x/ F+ T. }, e) X一种声音,and your voice
7 A5 L' Q% E2 G9 U1 A也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling., ~" X/ @) [! [( |
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
" N" V. E2 U7 I) v' h与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land6 o G5 }3 W% C l
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,& T4 b+ m$ P, z/ Y) g
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.; L* A4 W, D+ k
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。$ E' P w6 G/ @8 f1 c# p9 m
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss" e. |9 H$ w, A7 q; z" ]: B
有一个能够让思念的人,
& [% k( P( w# T其实也是一种幸福。
$ \' K5 E% d0 @4 c尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. & J. e& E7 a) A' X7 Q
柔柔的海风,2 x5 x7 L0 F* l6 X
甜甜的夏天。
3 a8 a3 Q, I: L4 V一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
5 v% P* p- p" U% G只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.. W1 U4 v; r$ T" _! q+ K& M
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.0 V+ u: h% U+ q0 I! v
想和你有共同的情结,7 x) m8 Q/ N4 m4 [' V/ E/ L9 \2 f5 v
共同的心愿。7 ]* Q9 T0 i1 R. T3 _7 V+ D' v3 c
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
1 c4 w. ]% q9 P% {* {, p$ x一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
7 t: i) _3 S4 v N" {* ]2 ]5 a5 L或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 2 c6 j0 [' s2 m
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
7 s/ ? c) J# p) x4 D; N8 Y『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?8 a6 L; o9 a9 I0 w* C1 c
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
, f4 o$ h- Z* c- t9 e浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”( X# ~! c4 f6 A( J/ q g: B( i& d
或是轻轻的一吻,: v7 F4 X5 ]( d7 ~
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
3 |5 P% X+ S0 J4 M9 }+ m& y# U' ]0 W0 S就足够了. That is enough.
/ _ Y( X# M* \* p- V& g8 y' p这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
: [4 \7 @$ e1 d- \终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
. ? K! c$ Z1 `+ V萌出了芽,
. Q8 s4 h1 P( |1 U7 i, M一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
9 a9 \: E3 P' m: e0 }9 k, ?浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
% C# `, j$ d' g# A, A2 m- |, s如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
$ j' L' C, s; k* u能够牵著你的手,
2 ^: r0 G* L, Y* ?. c; B那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.) a5 u! B7 i7 R0 ?$ G2 {
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
" E# N- M P. I# n- W& b9 w慢慢地细读,
7 \$ u9 s# b5 s$ n5 E我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
% w7 N; q$ [2 B9 i0 q在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ) u9 A: U, V4 m' d. P7 A/ ^" `
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
' }! v0 X% h3 ]6 P4 u5 y0 p就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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