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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem( a/ B/ g3 j, Q8 G0 m
Thanks a lot!!!
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3 Y$ b5 I" {; N$ U& r* [Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
& t# h1 ^# r2 T9 W; W+ V9 o( L( | Somehow I'd found something wrong with us G2 e7 c4 E- a
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
3 {+ t1 y% t1 `" e Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : L3 V) G$ s, V- R1 y" n. U
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
, t P( t) b1 Y5 q( w& V7 J Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ) }& a' U& `* ?
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
" Z- Q5 y6 k' d4 C- m) t somehow I realized you were still in my heart
4 t6 G$ V$ D4 Q3 @9 v6 H/ ]; L somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness, k( @2 {; n3 |7 r; d7 K; a, V1 I
somehow I lost myself inside again
. H/ w1 z- T: O% r1 eNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 \) `, h6 e/ Y) Q
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion& n# c y) [5 y
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
+ h! k/ |" B/ X( b4 ~ ]2 {2 hBasically, I almost finish this poem
( m( L0 M# d1 K I am 一个人de精彩! V7 D9 ^! c: q% D8 C4 a9 I
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* J1 h8 b! P3 x* r+ D& y* a
But........ a# V0 ?, G' e& G
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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