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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,1 q7 |1 A( q$ F: G2 o
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
+ d6 {- C% w$ V2 ~, j零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
; J( f, v% n0 H2 ~. ?现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
- U/ |/ K& \3 m) M2 u" `7 E梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
; L* \: m+ W$ H& u% L2 w1 a U1 f$ x/ j眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
6 y+ \% F- z7 b" k夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.' A- T4 I! v0 \/ ~* \) a7 K
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.% j& F+ F* {) S! y) {7 l; l
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
. d2 n" a7 Z5 e4 s我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
7 x1 Q5 x0 |8 N6 W) I% ]5 s4 l7 v那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。! b) H* }' E2 z. H+ Z) t
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
4 o3 S8 M7 i9 e7 @9 @昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
0 i" ~' Q8 M$ Q* n想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
2 T( C: {: [1 J- u- v最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
0 [. m5 p8 d% X" r5 E2 X: B) D, T9 a寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?* u q! H' r0 r1 c9 ?
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
1 w4 ^% T. q+ g; b迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
" L" @$ t0 X7 p最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
9 V) I0 I% _$ f% F7 g多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
% j3 u5 i( e2 U$ b3 N8 H# L& TWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
% F j9 O2 k+ ^; l' }多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously- G7 R% i) [9 z/ ^8 W, }3 ^
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
3 ?) f$ G9 K% N0 T- i; V多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
5 T9 v! M. }5 v$ b2 O7 ^/ Y为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
/ N2 @5 [* J' _( v& ]' S+ h多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!! [, E R8 q7 w0 G
永难平息的泪" o+ c7 Y4 r( y3 r5 D, `; Y
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes- G- k% H: B9 d t. b" N5 l6 Y# h
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes." v" [* q. A( J* h
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
) c8 Z5 `; t) |0 M. J让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
1 o! X/ D' V) j$ `你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
$ L' t# f- ~* b一抹微笑;
' u& G C5 |0 O0 F; ]一个手势;
, W+ J$ k7 o( N6 i) G" U5 P一片话语,! `2 ~' f1 i) `+ M# U0 F8 g5 S
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、( U2 |* n, A+ i+ Y
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
+ ^1 N7 \# [' e. a3 p Z心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
0 y% `# Y% l. }: w; C这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
+ Q& F8 Y( b3 a8 t' ]) e+ ^1 }也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
y2 \: J/ Z2 } B起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,3 c0 a3 H5 y: h! w; r) X) O1 l
我并不以为然。+ y; @* h2 ]% `% J) T' V
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed # s* f q' i1 Z3 q
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .& R; T0 r$ Y. E# D
被一种情绪所左右,2 K* F8 A9 M* _
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly ., a' ~' k+ }" G/ F" N- H
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
- T" o- f! j* j9 Y; o1 ?也不问我是否喜欢你,+ I. ?! D9 H9 b, r9 ^) n
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
! J( d- Q3 O/ \" F3 F, y# D$ h只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
+ S7 g' T, p) Y3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you% x/ F a( Z: _- P* d
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
, b5 @* R9 v! e& @4 \5 J然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
, n6 z2 j- ]7 |) a你的身影已化成一种氛围,
|* Q3 D" G" q& z* F. _记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.0 E% K6 p, p4 J' b5 q" G
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
q" ^6 g/ m8 e! ]随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
2 m& x- Y1 E( G; e, E3 o, p- t哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,& G4 G( u+ P" E. S7 v* y
一种声音,and your voice
v. E6 n+ s0 J+ \) M也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
& s# R: X* q9 Y. B6 W掺杂著幸福的感觉。3 Y& b7 ?& @6 W' j4 C) _
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land" g8 O' x0 V. u% _ V, g [
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,2 N: K+ z S4 q2 X
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
+ X5 N+ b( Y# E$ @( K q! N8 q纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。) \3 J3 {; z! |- h! a5 b7 }
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss4 J1 S( x; U# w9 \$ g
有一个能够让思念的人,$ U7 O% \" T f# T
其实也是一种幸福。
& Z8 Q2 C9 g5 C/ B6 g7 E7 i( u尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
( v2 h0 G& u3 W( B3 D; S柔柔的海风,( i5 e$ b1 w- b( b; F; V3 R
甜甜的夏天。 H( g& B7 H3 ?/ p" N
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy f( ^7 {* _' E2 c7 G$ w
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.; _* k3 N/ m' d# |5 k% g2 ?% E
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
) i8 D6 R3 O9 A2 X, g9 T想和你有共同的情结,9 b& S5 o& _( c1 C
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you/ V& k5 j- F S; |6 k! V
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
. S# F* b% j0 T& B% s9 E或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
" ?3 [, V$ a8 V: p, l或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
* n* Q$ C8 u, T) s9 f『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
; i/ t' Q4 X2 U! a( J- J: Q我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
5 ~# a _# l2 i0 j( Q' j; S& y W浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
! W W$ S" X) N& b4 {& n1 ^或是轻轻的一吻,
; t, a+ V, `1 P% K5 F+ G再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』8 G. j: T. I$ ~6 S
就足够了. That is enough.. P; |+ z8 Z5 n' @
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
8 p4 h# ^# E5 D; I2 h( g0 U( Z终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
* ~ ?' x! N& a% J x7 J" z萌出了芽,) h) m# R# G4 A+ Q5 L
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
, e6 l {9 w* I1 T; X浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
* z ^+ K: B$ [9 t5 `1 M0 X( C如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand/ ]( n5 W$ y. b3 O% L
能够牵著你的手,
# X! C! U" c0 ^: B. q那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.3 m0 x. _: Z7 P
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. ' e. ^8 V. y4 r) }5 ]3 c
慢慢地细读,
! u% z C# a% L5 J9 E9 M* H) I我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. l* I5 m7 ~% z6 Q7 K( r) `# E
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 4 U. W P6 ?4 \2 w% W
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
, S. M) v" r: H5 `就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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