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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,9 h4 N4 M, O; @2 v
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
+ K3 q) C* Q" H9 n: {; X4 X& g零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 3 \4 B3 O& b V
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
9 C) A: t7 e* a: q7 G; Q- G梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
, I- [, V; ?+ Y) C4 D/ x眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
6 E8 m9 q/ I m. C夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.; {* N. |9 [( F/ Z/ J/ V7 N; c
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.4 |8 k- h7 m. ]6 e, B i
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.8 f( w1 l9 N& @* K. |: t& ]
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
* p; s; j; F( C1 ]! n1 _' Z那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
/ g, C. `$ I/ A* y4 q- g3 N世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
. a1 Y C% P( J4 ?$ t, T3 f& N昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.7 f( O2 I8 R# r8 {! R4 ~: g1 d. y- m
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.# u1 [$ [5 {7 E. Y: u$ j
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
1 u4 J4 ]# n# S' A& \5 z) S( _; I寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?% L* H7 ~; `2 U1 `+ y9 ^ v# s% D
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
1 C% ] b( A+ n% t' P/ W/ \迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
! y9 Z8 [# M: i# p7 O% t最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
+ X# L* l$ G2 P& x多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
2 \( Q& D/ J! hWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
+ S3 c% s/ j6 ]8 h0 C多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
8 ]# k) f; j/ Y/ _% P$ C9 \不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
# O( _, p& x! ?! p6 K多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
+ d! R% {* h9 B4 f' A$ h: d为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?0 y* X+ A2 W( t9 W
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
* u3 h7 n h1 F2 C- N5 F3 k永难平息的泪
' R5 ?' A8 w0 h# H4 W' U' d1 i0 i7 M每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
/ E8 \( ]& {8 ~1 k# Z' Q~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.# Y' q! p8 B9 M! k$ G
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.& c7 _( F) f0 \& e8 ~
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
$ m& d, v& q; R: V5 s: O你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
3 e0 s/ _0 S; Z% Z, T一抹微笑;+ k( N6 D' g2 ~% k1 j8 y ]/ F
一个手势;
* x2 d/ S8 ?% `8 [6 n+ a一片话语,
( s: C/ X9 M; r! A v愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、 w/ `2 m# H( x- A ?
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner+ D! F# s. y; p2 X$ m. x1 h6 k
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
; |& Z9 @6 m* j: y这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
* v7 j+ O- |) Z7 K! N7 k也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..3 B" R% B0 H7 }6 c i- @
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
) L; Z. F+ f: F8 Q' e; R. k; w' f! m我并不以为然。- L9 r: t- Y( D2 z8 N
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
2 @; M2 D1 M% e0 U慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ./ U! s+ P) {' C7 a" A6 j. s {7 \4 L2 u8 K
被一种情绪所左右,
2 l. c' j8 f! H) n4 j( ^总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .! E' U/ g* P' w+ Z* l
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
' r, W- ~- u7 u- H/ P7 u' y7 [& c也不问我是否喜欢你,
% f& a, G( o8 g对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
: _; e* @) E& F$ Y3 |* [只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
$ E4 n- E# L- q8 O# b3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
6 f( `/ ]/ ^' S ?* J. J* s心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
7 R+ p8 e( @' S3 _然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 8 ?7 _+ b/ Z+ t9 A. l7 U
你的身影已化成一种氛围,1 l0 O4 e4 n# G( v2 d7 \
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
, s# Q& V! i) x0 }4 ]8 Y你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 7 P+ j0 x, I. E
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
: V8 g+ K% P# g- R哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,' l% }- B" p+ G# f
一种声音,and your voice
; _! P0 n( @9 u也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
% n& G; m9 ^4 Y* l7 {) f+ B6 d掺杂著幸福的感觉。
8 l8 a* ?4 v% S. Z与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
2 y0 t' k0 ]( l9 [5 R n% p象雪花般撒落在我的心田,2 q n+ V/ }' v7 d# t0 I. k/ E
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
2 @/ u0 q) K& H" H& b* v0 P纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
% g: ?- @1 L* W你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss3 i$ x, T1 M" l% a2 m3 q3 h1 x- N' z
有一个能够让思念的人,+ C( w9 G, J0 A8 b
其实也是一种幸福。7 n& f+ a; }0 u7 X: S# U
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. " _ `+ m; n9 M- }! b, `
柔柔的海风,
. Q. r" x% s. N$ \% i; W8 h甜甜的夏天。8 \8 o: L$ G8 s+ x
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
) |7 w/ s( h7 q只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
5 W5 x& N) l, f6 Q( t仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.% W7 e/ _- i5 ?+ ]" @. d7 N. i& `( L
想和你有共同的情结,& q3 ^% S; @' D( W
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you" ^8 d3 O+ Z4 R
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together$ Y* L2 N, U _4 @" _
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
) l9 t5 r4 Q5 @5 {或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.4 z9 s. v: f9 j+ n: P4 Z
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
4 u1 K- o- r" s& R9 k+ }- }" }+ q我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
4 ^0 Y. `+ s- p! Y3 Z浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”$ G' x; r7 ` v, ^+ G, ~# A
或是轻轻的一吻, T! N4 }. y! z1 C' k& n3 g
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』: k3 B! i5 j1 u$ a; w
就足够了. That is enough.3 ?3 q7 \/ D7 c
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
3 u+ c8 s: f) Z7 R终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
) ?9 |5 ?, G0 i3 _, y8 f: V萌出了芽,$ ^8 c, Y7 Z8 T8 P3 f5 P
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing1 g: R: L5 C0 c+ g4 P2 q; q
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure." _& F2 r7 V. J5 q6 l
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
; L! d8 A) l2 X8 g) n2 Q4 P能够牵著你的手,
# |6 J( W B, G+ [/ u那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
2 x4 n# f) _8 v让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
8 {% a+ h$ t; K4 Y% M慢慢地细读,( g! O4 X w3 a9 O' T; B4 p
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 6 ~- |4 s3 e; U' ~
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 7 B8 r7 E3 B& H- ^6 ^+ H3 J
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
( ~( f: E1 `2 y. V0 Z9 @' A就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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