急求懂英語20-1tutor一名，现有essay不会写，价格面议！！！！！！

maomaochouchou · 发表于 2009-11-20 21:57

本人现急需曾经学过英语20-1的同学，我现在有一些essay和作业不会写，希望有好心人可以教我或者帮我。价格面议，有意者致电 780-885-8905

朝阳 · 发表于 2009-11-20 22:21

你在这儿说说吧，让大家出出主意，啥钱不钱的，以后到了30那ESSAY海了，还得学着渔才行。

妖娆小妖 · 发表于 2009-11-20 22:23

同意楼上的，我学30的时候那作文写的脑袋都大，shakespeare 读的都蒙。还得学会自己咋写。

朝阳 · 发表于 2009-11-20 22:24

其实ESSAY最主要的是你要有个主题和结构，然后前后呼应，中间那三段紧扣你的主题。力争没有语法错误，即使语言不是说得那么理想，应该七十左右没有太大问题。

妖娆小妖 · 发表于 2009-11-20 22:24

本帖最后由妖娆小妖于 2009-11-20 22:25 编辑

但偶第一次写作文考了全班第一，因为老师让回家准备然后课堂写。其他同学估计没准备让俺占了个便宜。
再后来太多了，写完都懒得改了。

牛肉粉丝 · 发表于 2009-11-20 22:26

这20，30都是啥啊？我咋就没学过这东西

Crisis · 发表于 2009-11-20 22:31

来来来，给同学们点参考资料哈

Dr. Stirewalt's 5-paragraph rule for writing Introductions

Of the many tasks involved in writing a good conference paper, I find writing the introduction section to be the most difficult. This is unfortunate, as a poorly structured argument sets the wrong tone for what might otherwise be really good research. To help manage this painful process, I have developed a heuristic, called the five-paragraph rule, that is useful for organizing introductions. The heuristic prescribes that good introductions should contain a sequence of five major pieces, each of which should fit into a single paragraph in order to force the writer to communicate at the appropriate level of abstraction.

The heuristic borrows ideas from persuasive argument and structured analysis/structured design (ala DeMarco/Yourdon), and it is reminscent of a similar structuring mechanism from freshman level courses in English composition. My success in publishing papers increased dramatically once I began to use this heuristic to structure my introductions.

The heuristic is: Design your introductions to comprise five paragraphs whose purpose and contents are as follows:

1) Introductory paragraph:
Very briefly: What is the problem and why is it relevant to the audience attending *THIS CONFERENCE*? Moreover, why is the problem hard, and what is your solution? You must be brief here. This forces you to boil down your contribution to its bare essence and communicate it directly.

2) Background paragraph:
Elaborate on why the problem is hard, critically examining prior work, trying to tease out one or two central shortcomings that your solution overcomes.

3) Transition paragraph:
What keen insight did you apply to overcome the shortcomings of other approaches? Structure this paragraph like a syllogism: Whereas P and P => Q, infer Q.

4) Details paragraph:
What technical challenges did you have to overcome and what kinds of validation did you perform?

5) Assessment paragraph:
Assess your results and briefly state the broadly interesting conclusions that these results support. This may only take a couple of sentences. I usually then follow these sentences by an optional overview of the structure of the paper with interleaved section callouts.

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朝阳 · 发表于 2009-11-20 23:33

这20，30都是啥啊？我咋就没学过这东西; X$ o0 [! m( v& R- g" {) ?7 b. w$ c
牛肉粉丝发表于 2009-11-20 22:26

羡慕啊，还小于二十呢。

等到二十岁三十岁就知道了啊。

说明你没受过折磨，挺好嘀。

朝阳 · 发表于 2009-11-20 23:33

科比真认真啊

Crisis · 发表于 2009-11-20 23:34

科比真认真啊8 B# F9 e; f& t/ A; f
朝阳发表于 2009-11-20 23:33

老科认真的说：这是咱珍藏的资料，呵呵

awake · 发表于 2009-11-20 23:36

羡慕啊，还小于二十呢。
' ?( \9 U. ]7 _等到二十岁三十岁就知道了啊。
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. T7 J: e Y. }. y说明你没受过折磨，挺好嘀。0 q5 p6 ^! `& g+ j: x5 E
朝阳发表于 2009-11-20 23:33

白活了，n老了也不知道这是啥啊！{:3_106:}

朝阳 · 发表于 2009-11-21 19:12

白活了，n老了也不知道这是啥啊！{:3_106:}
$ @; K7 R, e& l% g: Q( `awake 发表于 2009-11-20 23:36

你逗死偶了，那偶更不能白说了。
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妖娆小妖 · 发表于 2009-11-22 09:12

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